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Violanthe
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PostTry this Opener! (03/07)

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:22 pm
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How does this opener strike you?

Mars is free now. We're on our own. No one tells us what to do.

Ann stood at the front of the train as she said this.

But it's so easy to backslide into old patterns of behavior. Break one hierarchy and another springs up to take its place. We will have to be on guard for that, because there will always be people trying to make another Earth. The areophany will have to be ceaseless, an eternal struggle. We will have to think harder than ever before what it means to be Martian.



If you've never read this book, or had no clue where the opener comes from, then how does it strike you? If you had only this opener to go on, would you read more? Does it grab you and spur you to read on? Or does it leave you unenthusiastic?

If you read the book it came from, did you remember right away or did you have to look it up? What made it so memorable - or not so memorable?

If you are interested to read on, then do a search on the opening line and tell us what it is.
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 1:40 pm
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I probably wouldn't read it. Not using quotes for dialog annoys and confuses me.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:00 am
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I'm not sure that these are quotations so much as heavily-voiced narration.
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