If you've never read this book, or had no clue where the opener comes from, then how does it strike you? If you had only this opener to go on, would you read more? Does it grab you and spur you to read on? Or does it leave you unenthusiastic?
If you read the book it came from, did you remember right away or did you have to look it up? What made it so memorable - or not so memorable?
Joined: 03 Apr 2006 Posts: 318 Location: Milwaukee, WI
Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 12:13 pm
I'd probably read a little further to see what kind of phantasms and apparitions we're talking about.
I have a slight problem with the second sentence. There's a fog... it's dimming magic, but then in the very next sentence it says that the sorcery gleams and sparkles. Huh?
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